if i were u i would redo the whole piece start out with your focals en work towards them
you have 2 focals the green light and the girl make sure they are on screen not some break light through the trees becouse that light sucks alot of attention. if u want that light then use it for your focal points.
think about were u wanna place your focals and how u place them becouse those are your most important parts. so dont place them on the edge of your paper and think about their size.