een illustratie die ik wil gaan uitwerken, ik heb voor mezelf even een line up van de characters gemaakt die er in voor komen (let niet op de uitwerking van de characters daar ben ik erg lui in geweest)
For the line drawing : The only thing i would change is the guy in the back. I would just make him a little more vertical, cause now because of the girl, the table, and the dude, my eye flies right off the page. They are all pointing right too much. If the guy is more vertical, the composition will be more anchored :)
Yeah I kinda had the feeling they went off the page, I rotated the dude a few times but I thought it was better to put him in the same line as the others. But thnx for the feedback ill change it ^^
For the line drawing : The only thing i would change is the guy in the back. I would just make him a little more vertical, cause now because of the girl, the table, and the dude, my eye flies right off the page. They are all pointing right too much. If the guy is more vertical, the composition will be more anchored :)
ReplyDeleteYeah I kinda had the feeling they went off the page, I rotated the dude a few times but I thought it was better to put him in the same line as the others. But thnx for the feedback ill change it ^^
ReplyDeleteplus als die creep verticaler staat de plaat dreigender/spannender wordt
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