Busy working on a painting for my dad's bar.
Gonna make him the grim reaper, holding his wife (a fallen angel).
Cause he's got a tattoo of the Grim Reaper on his back.
Just need some feedback before i take it to the next level. Coloring and detailing.
I know his forarm is super long and needs shortening.. and her legs seem long.. so thats gonna be fixed in the next version. But what I need to know is whats wrong that im not seeing X_X
Oh and the shiny thing was put there by my gf.
Composition going to much to the left??
His forarm is super long....
ReplyDeleteGhehe just kidding... It could use some space in the left to get the subject in the middle. Also, try not to push the wing to much to the back couse then it would go "trough" the reaper.
or put it to the left a little more for an asymmetric composition, depends on what you want, it's looking good already :)
ReplyDeletekun je miss ook een ref van je ouders plaatsen? want volgens mij klopt het gezicht niet helemaal van de vrouw.
ReplyDeletemisschien kun je de haren minder horizontaal laten waaien maar meer laten krullen
zoals dit miss:
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/110/286466157_ae350867ed.jpg
de gezichten lijken nog niet helemaal.. ik wil daar nog geen moeite in stoppe omdat ik eerst op andere dingen wil focusen. zoals compositie en tonen etc
ReplyDeletethe main subject in the middle is boring. golden grid kinda thingy
ReplyDeleteok duwd
ReplyDeleteals je die haren laat wappere laat de rest ook wappere en die pose is echt FOKED statisch doe vette shit met die wings en die cloth van de reeper gogo dinamic pose je kan hier veeel meer mee. cuz if u put a bush on his head hes a friggin tree
and i would add more mountains in the back becouse that will create more depth the current rocks are so few that they kinda dissapear
hehe watch more hiphop vids, and let that girl hang on the mister or sumthing.
ReplyDeletemore threat and more sexiness